Rough Cut Critique: - intro too long - good interview - break up interview with other zumba footage - film her class! - interview her students - do research and find info on how many participants nationally or worldwide to build your argument that this is a national/global phenomenon (so far I don't see it - assume your audience does not know anything)
Rough Cut Critique:
ReplyDelete- intro too long
- good interview
- break up interview with other zumba footage
- film her class!
- interview her students
- do research and find info on how many participants nationally or worldwide to build your argument that this is a national/global phenomenon (so far I don't see it - assume your audience does not know anything)